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Yay~ I finally finished it! TTwTT I wanted to draw Marisa in her Ten Desires outfit so here it is! :3
So I was trying out making sketchy coloured linearts and I think it looks great, but not really the way I wanted though. And the colouring looks watery which is what I don't really like... OTL
But I'm pretty happy with the background though! : D Even though it's not that realistic-looking.^^ Oh, and I wanted to draw some mushrooms too but I'm too lazy. xD
Constructive critique is appreciated!
Marisa Kirisame is from Touhou
So I was trying out making sketchy coloured linearts and I think it looks great, but not really the way I wanted though. And the colouring looks watery which is what I don't really like... OTL
But I'm pretty happy with the background though! : D Even though it's not that realistic-looking.^^ Oh, and I wanted to draw some mushrooms too but I'm too lazy. xD
Constructive critique is appreciated!
Marisa Kirisame is from Touhou
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© 2011 - 2024 KeroTohoFan
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Vision Originality Technique ImpactHey there KeroTohoFan, nice improvement especially the usage of lighting~ one thing i'd suggest though is to not use gray/colorless/white lights. Before white, there's always a yellow/orange blending so the lighting would look lively. next would be the application of shadowing on clothes seems to lack shading power, making the clothes not stand out (or to be more precise, the tree shadowing became too strong that the clothes shading is hardly noticeable). don't use black for the shading, but rather very low saturated purples to blues so it would look dynamic and would blend in with the cloth shading color.
The hair is really great, especially the eyes, it's really much better compared before, as well as the composition/idea of the image.
I also suggest trying to apply a low saturated mood overlay gradients and texture to make the artwork lively. There's also a technique with lighting using the lumi/overlay/screen layer in SAI where you "dot" /"blot" circles of light yellow/orange to make the lighting im talking about.
That's all, keep up the good work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
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